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I really enjoyed this one. It has a slightly different style asking questions at the beginning. In fact, if you read this one first (I read it last) then it sets everything up nicely. Do you plan to add any links across the Gemini papers so that relevant sections / words can be accessed by the reader. There are lots of words and phrases here that could hyperlink across the the what paper.
Linked to the above, it is a bit of an isolated comment about CReDo on page 4. Needs more detail (although probably not the best place to do so) or a link.
P5: The sub-headings don’t all work. For example: Q: How do you encourage a new market in DTs? A: Legal barriers!
Ending still looks like it is work in progress? As the final paper do you want a summary figure for all the Gemini papers – is it even worth including the same thing in all the papers to create more ‘glue’ and show where the principles introduced fit in the wider scheme of things?