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I like the structure of this and especially the link to the SDG’s. I also like ‘purpose-led technology’ – spot on!
My only comment would be that it refers a few times to a paradigm shift – a term which is frequently overused but I do think applies here, however does it explain in sufficient detail early in the document why it is such a shift? For example, I am thinking of the modeller who has used observations for many years for asset management – will they get the full transformative potential of what is proposed compared to current state-of-the-art? It is clear as you read through it, but I do think you need to be careful when using the paradigm word (and phrases like game-changing) to to keep the reader on side early doors.